this skips around alot, like a totally random sentence unrelated to the first. but im guessing thats cuz you had to cram it in the the character limit. i would really like to see a sequel on this.

I agree, I would like to see a sequel. But yes, I think basically the part that stood out to me the most was the second paragraph. It seemed to be….sort of, thrown out there, a random piece of information. Other than that, I liked it.

I appreciate your comments, thnx for reading it. I had to take away a sentence or 2 because of the space allowed. thanx for the stars! your input is valued. Its a small part of a much longer story i wrote.

You should sequel this.

I love the way u wrote that, I could hear the accent in my head :)

cool. My idol is a taco

I think it winds up a little more confusing because the names are similar, and Cole sounds at first like a veteran rider, but by the end he’s being welcomed like a greenhorn. That length limit can be a real bit…sorry, got interupted there by a bullet.

omg LOL to THX

i just read that story before

i like this…but i agree that he sounds totally pro at the beginning then he’s new… but i get the back in time thing [?] in that he’s remembering when he first started?!?!

I should mention that Buffalo Bill was about 14-15 when he worked for the Pony Express. But this is interesting. I’ll read on.