This is the first battle scene I’ve ever done, and as you can see, I don’t easily do violence. However, I’m writing a fantasy novel and have planned a huge battle for the climax. Yeah, not sure how well that’ll turn out!

Sorry for the confusion. THIS one IS my entry.

Okay, glad that’s clear. Now, do you think you could just go to “edit” and put “stovohobo challenge” in the tag, so I can find it later? Twould help a bunch. Thanks!

Hey – I liked the opening a lot, but there are some unnecessary ajectives and adverbs. How about something like this – He brandished his sword and prepared for battle, letting loose with a cry of rage. “Rivers will run with blood for this!” Drop those adjectives and you’ve really got something here, which is why I’m still gonna give it 5 stars.