Uh…I have no idea what I was doing here. I haven’t written poetry in ages, and when I did, it was always “by the book” and I made sure every rule was followed in whatever form I was using. This one was just done from what I felt…And it’s weird to me because of that.

i disagree – it’s nice.
i like it =]

I like it too. I believe that this fit the challenge nicely, if you haven’t done poetry for a while. This fits the bill beautifully.

umm….. interesting…. well written and lovely, but so… depressed?

I loved it! Yeah, who needs forms?! This seems expertly done.

beauuuuuuutiiiifulllllll! honestly, i think the best poetry is the kind that doesn’t follow ANY rules. :]

I think it has good bones, but needs reworking to remove some of the awkward phrasing and repetitiveness.