oooo! it’s a gun!
BOOM

‘fraid not, dahlin.

MWAHAHAHAHA

evil laugh! awesomeness!

Ooh, this is intriguing….I like your descriptions and characters.

WHEEE ! I has impressed Stovohobo! oh gosh this MADE MY DAY

a wedding ring! she’s gonna propose to her boyfriend! that makes no sense but …

i say a knife! much better than the whole wedding ring thing

hahha MBTM .. made ur day hahha =]

Great hook at the end.

wonderful series, kept me wanting more.

says the guy that said he didn’t like the last one.

…nice imagery here.

You have a very nice arsenal of cliff hangers here. good job.