Well done. Hope you continue with the idea!

Funny, very cute. I like the playful attitude towards time travel.

Ha, this is hilarious. Great job. As always…

Totally imaginative. I love that they’re only there because of a science experiment that worked a little too well.

i love how you said that her mocking tone could carve an ice sculpture. very creative!

hahaha this is hilarious! i especially loved the line about her tone carving an ice sculpture…oh wait brokenhearted said that. lol. good job.

Really great, this whole thing is just awesome

lol! i’ve seen this story on the most popular list often and finally came to read it – and i’m glad i did! this is so cute/funny! ahhhahahahahahah =]

Lol playing with the space/time continuum.