Since I hated high school and was very glad to be rid of it, I thought this would be an accurate Achilles heel for me to attempt to write.

If this is your achilles heel…

I see how you wove mystery into it, too…and a little bit of fantasy. Gotta love it.

Very nice answer to the challenge. I for one have some PTSD symptoms from high school, so I can relate. (um, PTSD is post traumatic stress disorder, just in case)

Yeah, I still have nightmares that I’m summoned back across the country to participate in a marching band show I’ve never learned. It’s absolutely sick.

The title alone is worth a star. I love how you went from teenage-angst to demonic in 1000 characters. (OK, it’s not so far.)

This is great, I love the first sentence, and the second paragraph, and how bout the third one too, and maybe the fourth….

It was amazing. Well, the title was at least. From the title, I was imagining something slightly darker, so I was a tad disappointed.

The character limit really bit me on this one. I had grand plans…but they just didn’t happen.

cool story. i liked her best friend, shes’ not sappy. but guys dont like to be called pretty !

Kermitgorf said: guys dont like to be called pretty
Yeah, but some of them are, regardless.

And it doesn’t stop us from calling them so.

Ahh, highschool. It’s like prison, but with more drama and stoned teachers.

Ahh, the prom – brings back many memories, most of them the worst of my nightmares…. I hate High School too – went to 3 different high schools in 4 years. This was well done. Kudos! – Yoda

wow! this is how I feel on a daily basis!

Grreat start!