great start! i would love to see a sequel!

Oh, this is great! So much potential….sequel. Now. I command you.

owwch. stovohobo and brokenheared are right, this really needs a sequel!!
can i command you too without sounding rude? :D

aww thanks so much guys! I’ll deffinitely write a sequel. :]

Yay, I read this five times. =/

Muhahahah! I’m giving you one star!! >=D

Yikes, yes, one intense little ficlet.