Ug, ficlets are hard to write. They’re so short! I kind of wanted to add more, but I guess I could write a sequel later. So…intriguing enough?

very intriguing.

very! this can’t be your first timewith sci-fi!

This is great. Incredible descriptions, and a wonderful ending that leaves us hanging. Kinda reminds me of the Matrix.

Thanks! Yep, this has been my first try at sci-fi. And I just realized now its similarity to the Matrix (whoops!). I didn’t realize it as I was writing it…but it’ll definitely be different if you read the coming sequel! =)

Her connection to Reality has been broken
Dang! I hate when that happens!

_{Ug, ficlets are hard to write. They’re so short!
Ditto.}

intriguing enough?
Absolutely, with a hint of romance for fun.

=P Is your connection to reality broken often? I know mine is. Zone out time

Yay! It’s intriguing =)

verrrry intriguing…nice sci-fi for your first attempt…i’m very impressed.