Great Writing Stovo. Maybe you could sequel some of my stories. ; ) If interested see Not so according to plan.

Interesting that you went from talking about the Third Reich to a girl going to Germany…
This is a very intriguing series.

A nice departure that (I’m sure) will soon become incredibly relevant.

It was okay, but I didn’t like the “she was seventeen, after all” bit. It seemed rather forced and it could have flowed better.

I think the problem that you’re seeing, Laine, is “She was” at the beginning of every sentence. I noticed it too.

i didn’t notice it until u pointed it out lol =]

im very proud of you stovo for writing a story about germany

AND

being able to write it IN GERMAN in the title and spelling it correctly
i give you 5 stars just for that lol
ill be on the look out for un-umlauted words in your sequels! ;)

concentration camp-type-place related to germany? hmmm…
LoA