Oh, you’re improving. Just a few more spelling coreections (haha. Get it?) and you’ll be on your way. I like it.

hehehe. this is fun.

I think i fixed the spelling.. i need an editor lol. always accept your input Stovo. im glad u liked it blueyedwonder

aw, this is good!

ty rockstar.

I really, really do not like $n*w (it’s a swearword for me), so that probably kept me from enjoying the piece quite so much. No offense.

I Hate $n*w too.