Wow that had lots of long words in it and hard names too
im sorry? this one didn’t flow as well…i suppose i’ll blame the 1024 character rule, though it’s probably my brain (forced to jump between ficlets and an essay on west nile. eek)
Yeah, this was missing your usual spark. I loved the “as chock full of fake sugar as Splenda” line though. XD
perhaps a vacation is needed…or that science essay i need to finish. urghle.
I agree, the Splenda simile was my favorite.
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