Comments on No such thing as faeries?Yeah right. by Sailor Emo

Green Apple

i love stories about faeries! great start, i really hope you write a sequel!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:47:30.
YodaOnCrack

Interesting thoughts and ideas. A colorful snippet of prose. Tips – two spaces after every period… “Especially me.” is a frag. There are other frags too. There’s a great book called “The Elements of Style” that will help you with this sorta stuff. I gave it a 5 because I love the creative ideas. I also like stories about faeries – I may just sequel this one. Good job!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:47:30.
Richard Peck

Yes, very creative! I think the frags give it a sort of quick pased flow.

By the way, this is RichardPeck. Band is in full swing now and i thought this name was more appropriate.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:47:30.
Alexa ♥

There were borders everywhere. I just never noticed them until I had created my own
Very true in life as well.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:47:30.
fluffy wolfman

awesome, but one question…. WHY ISN ’T UR BEST FRIEND ON UR TOP FIVE FAVORITE WRITERS !?!?!?!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:47:30.