cool, that was really good

Funny little ficlet. : )

Oops, I accidentally rated my own ficlet!

I’ll give it a four since I kinda liked this one. : )

Louis Lamour would be proud. Great western, not many can give life to a western tale, i’m impressed Yoda, Very impressed.

Start of a good western… keep it going!

i agree with BARomero keep it going it is good,,,

I really like this. The descriptions are great and the tone is dead on. It awesome!

I like how the it morphs smoothly from description to situation to character study to backstory, all in a little ficlet. Very nice.

this was really great. i loved it!! i really hope you sequel it!!

Thanks

I’m working on a sequel right now – lots of possibilities here…. Hmmm……

kill ten men for a drink of piss water? Great line!

this was really good. loved it =)

I’m not usually a fan of Westerns, but I liked this.

You are a writing master! I will call you Master Yoda. Kind of has a ring to it.

kill ten men for a drink of piss water is one of the best lines I’ve ever read.

love the ending very John Wayne.. ruthless. Good story. Good description of his thirst.