Oh, that’s kewl….nice descriptions.

really nice imagery and descriptive words here…i hope you’re planning on sequeling?

Unless someone beats me to it…

I love the setting of a crumbling cathedral in the middle of a black forest. This could be lots of fun.

Oooh, kind of creepy. I like it. Wonder who would beat you to doing a sequel to your own story.

I like this. I definitely want to know what happens next.

This is really nice. Really paints a picture.

Excellent imagery. Who is calling Regina we all want to know.