What if you write it and later find out it uses any of those? Because really, you can’t expect everyone to go back and check to see if those are present. Ha, anyway, sounds cool. I’ll see….

so…..basically just free verse?

poetry is not my thang! but good idea forthose brave enuff to try.

Could you publish an example? I’m not sure if you mean a short story told with poetic language (which you do all the frakkin time) or a fiction story told through free-verse poetry, such as Edgar Lee Masters’ Spoon River Anthology and Karen Hesse’s Out of the Dust.

either or, whatever works for you.

i just want something beautiful that doesn’t conform to what people think makes poetry beautiful.

does my “our revolution” ficlet count?!

its semi poetic but i think has a rhythm to it

and im not sure about the other things lol

but im glad you liked it anyways
thanks !

well i wrote another one even if it doesnt

its an english translation of a german poem i wrote

(also posted on ficlets – please read and comment if you understand/speak german! i would love to find anyone who does!)

but im not sure if this one has assonance or not
but hope everyone likes it – i dont
its better in german but ho hum

Yeah, that one’s beyond me. I’d just wind up using the poetic stuff on accident and flogging myself in the editing process.