hmm…interesting, leaves me wanting to know more…

I don’t know. Might be too much happening in one Ficlet. You didn’t include your usual descriptiveness, so I had trouble imagining it all.

Really? Durn. I was aiming for more description, trying a different style. Phooie.

Experiments are fun. It worked for me, but I’m a little concerned for all the innocent bystanders.

i liked it. a few less desc than your usual, but i didnt have any problems w/ it

On the contrary, I thought it was pretty well described. Especially the “vulnerable skull” line.

Loving the tone.