Ooh…is the girl going to take action? We need more ficlet heroines.

Intense! I love the realistic way you’ve portrayed her grief/worry.

_{I love that there might be deadly monsters at the bottom of the Charles. That just tickles me.}

Best phrase: a voice spat in her ear:

I agree with Alexa, this is nice…I wanna know what happens, unless I get to make it up myself! =)

I have to admire the turning of the tables somewhat to have the girl, left dutifully behind by our destiny bound hero, get called in to save his sorry hide. Nicely done!

oo! omgomgomgomgomg sequel or i’m going to uhm.. yeah.. like.. die.

wow questions i have is what monster who has him and what did matt figure out and … MIssions ?