Comments on Nothing to Hold On To by [pens&feathers]

FlirtingWithaBrickWall

woah. nice.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
[pens&feathers]

Thanks, BrickWall!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
blueyedwonder

WOWWWW !!!! sorry, a lil hyper right now, but veeeeeeeeeery nice! impressive!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
YodaOnCrack

Wwo, Pens&Feathers, I’m impressed! So many different styles of writing in this challenge, and this one demonstrates your creativity and unique style. Well told! This is going to be a tough contest to judge…
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
Kermitgorf

very well written, but for some reason those 1st two sentences were hard to read and understand,had to re-read it a few times.
did you intend to write it’s cloging head instead of it clogging head?
all the laughter was cool.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
[pens&feathers]

Whoops! Kermitgorf, you were right. There was supposed to be a “my” in there. Thanks for pointing it out, I’ve edited it. : )
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.
cainegreene

Nice possession or is it just losing one’s mind?
Loved it
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:48:51.

Comments on Nothing to Hold On To by [pens&amp;feathers]