Hey everyone! Please comment!

niccccceee =] =] =]
btw, u mmmmite not wanna comment ur own stories telling other ppl to comment – it makes u look desprete :-/

o well
2 late now

so whaddya think?

From an overall point of view, it looks like the rhythm would be slightly off. When I read it, though, it didn’t cross my mind. Nice.

Thanx =D