Jerry take off those stupid pants, I’ll be in the foodcourt Ash said; walking quickly out of the store.
Well that had to have been a catastrophic blow to her enormous ego, a smile streached across her face.
Jerry caught up to her; what’s that about, he pointed at her face?
What she asked?
That smile.
Nothing, she wiped it away.
Jerry took the tray to a back corner booth and they sat down.
Do you think I devastated her, he ask playfully?
Kidd’n, totally; did you see the look on her face, if she ever had a romantic thought about you; well that’s gone.
A few minutes later.
Ash about the dance he looked down, about the dance I was just, well will you go with me?
Ash stopped eating, this was a surprise she couldn’t suppress her smile this time.
Yes, she thought he’d never ask.
Cool he said, now less go check out the new store.
New store? Yeah it’s called Juxtaposition .
Inspired by
Ash stared at him a moment. “I was thinking about it.” she answered. “Why?” Jerry opened his mouth to answer, but never got t…
A sequel to Pink Miniskirt
About the author
Tiggerstripn2
Somewhere on the edge of... Oh crap!
The “I’m Watching” series was inspired by my stalker {“You Jerk”}
” Sophia’s Story ” is for my kids, the rest is for fun.
Home alone can sometimes make you a little crazy, and sometimes you can write it down.
“Say what you want and be who you are
because those that mind don’t matter
and those who matter don’t mind”
English class = D – F so well I think you get it.
I can’t seem to get it right, so there will alway’s be something wrong with my grammar, punctuation, whatever. But I am really tring.
Not all of us graduated high school.
Struggling with my Texas slang.
( only good for western’s )
I could use all the help I can get.
So if your out there, help me!
(Please use my notes if it’s bad news).
Just telling me what the problem is want help.
If you presequel or sequel let me know.
We all like comments and ratings
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I stopped putting people on my contact list because theres just to many!
Published on October 07, 2007.
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