Pink Miniskirt

by Lone Writer

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Ash stared at him a moment. “I was thinking about it.” she answered. “Why?” Jerry opened his mouth to answer, but never got the chance.
Marianne Spencer flounced up to him. “Jeremiah Springfield! What a surprise to see you here!” Ash rolled her eyes. Marianne had been looking right at them when they walked into the store.
“Um, hi Marianne.” Jerry said, looking slightly annoyed. Marianne was pratically glowing, everything she wore was pink.
“Jerry, please take off those pants!” Ash begged. “Oh Jeremiah!” Marianne cried. “Those pants look so hot on you!”Jerry turned bright red. Ash’s mouth fell open in shock. “You-You’re not serious.” Marianne gave Ash a look of open contempt. “I’m always serious Ashcroft. “Ash’s face flushed with anger. “It’s Ash.” she bit out. He put a hand on her shoulder. “Ash.” She closed her eyes and counted to ten. “Let’s go.” They turned to go. “Jeremiah wait!” He turned around. “Yes?” “Will you go to the dance with me?”Jerry grinned at her. “Sorry, I’m going with someone else.”

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Pink Miniskirt

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    Really hard to tell who was speaking. Please start a new paragraph for each speaker.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    A bit confusing, but I felt like I could follow most of it.

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sorry ran out of characters.

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    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 4 months ago

    this series is awesome so far!

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