No One Goes Out Alone

by Tales From The Script

Shot’s rang out behind me one then two, the mutated creature’s backed away grumbbling, eye’s glaring.

I was shaking, my brother took my arm and pulled me up.

What do you think your doing comimg out here alone
Jake said pissed?

The baby needed, he cut me off.

I don’t care you should have waited on us to get back from hunting, Jake shouted, hoisting me over his shoulder.
We godda get you to the house and bandaged,
your losing a lot of blood.

Dad still got fever Sam asked?
Yeah…; “hey…I’m a little dizzy” ; “then all went black”.

Mamma get the first aid kit,
Jake shouted; as he lay Jim on the table.
Jim, she cried; “then froze for a second”.
Mom, Jake snapped.
“She ran to the back to get the kit”.

I’ll go check on dad… then I’ll go to the well Sam said.

“Jake stared at Jim’s leg”, “no…no one goes out alone” .

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. No One Goes Out Alone

    The 13 Year-Old's Buddy Icon The 13 Year-Old

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Remember to put quotes around speech
    (they look like this “blah blah blah”)

  2. No One Goes Out Alone

    User 6159's Buddy Icon User 6159

    Posted 11 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    poor grammar. can’t figure out what you’re trying to say. quotes are key.

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