Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

by More Than Meets The Eyes

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“I can’t believe you’re a graduate!”
“Yeah, a college girl now. Princeton here comes Jessica Nicole Glavin.”

“Mom, for the hundreth time today, I didn’t get accepted to Princeton.”
“Not yet.
“Not ever, today’s graduation!”

“Don’t worry, you’ll get in.”
“Yeah tell that to my teacher, she’ll be suprised. And then if you tell Aunt Margy she might even laugh. It’s impossible!”

“Nothing’s impossible. You should know that, Jess. We raised you that way.”

“Well, I’ll tell you what’s impossible, college. Mom I failed all but three classes. I’m no college girl yet.”

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Haha, nice.

  2. Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Not to be picky, but don’t you get held back if you fail that many classes?

  3. Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hahaahahah failed all but three? and i thought my C in science was bad.. [[i’m bringing it up i swear!]]

  4. Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

    More Than Meets The Eyes' Buddy Icon More Than Meets The Eyes

    Posted about 1 year ago

    uh. . .i hate science

  5. Graduation(yeah right){dialogue challenge}

    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the idea here… I think if you had made it longer you would be able to explain things a little better. I was confused about who was speaking at different times (I’m assuming the “jump cuts” signaled a change in speakers/conversations?). A good effort though. Thanks for entering my challenge!

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