Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}

by Eternal♥

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I sat in the black Honda waiting for him to get in. “What have I gotten myself into?” “What if my boyfriend finds out?” “Oh, it doesn’t matter were not even together, were on break.” I was so embarrassed of even being in his presence.

“His cologne smells so good, ugh! I wonder why he never wanted to stay with me? He’s near perfect.” He turned his radio on and I just stared at him blankly. “Oh my god, what a dork, he’s actually singing. Oh, he’s singing to me?? Okay, obviously he is playing a little game here, he thinks he’s going to trick me into liking him again.” “Did he just put his hand on my thigh!!!! Ugh, I should of slapped him…what am I saying? I know I love when he flirts like that.”

I was craving some Wendy’s so I let him know. “He better pay, shit, he’s working and he invited me out, so he has to pay, oh see I knew he would.” “Wow, I’m inclined to misbehave around him.” That’s how I ended up having sex with my ex.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}

    MeAndTheMoon's Buddy Icon MeAndTheMoon

    Posted 9 months ago

    i like the idea of being trapped by emotions instead of being physically trapped, but i could have used a little more serious of a struggle.

  2. Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}

    Eternal♥'s Buddy Icon Eternal♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    Jaja, yeah.
    Actually this is a true story kind of thing.
    And um, I’m a pretty boring person.
    I don’t really know how to express my own emotions, so, yeah, I see what you mean.
    That’s why I like to write. Because in the “real world” I have no smile, laugh, or tears. But on my paper I do.
    Anyway I was trying how to express amusement, that’s how I felt during this whole dialog in my head. But um? Italics maybe? or bold??
    Jajaja I dont know!

  3. Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice. It was retty good. I could feel the feelings and thoughts running through her mind. But it could have used a little more details and such.

  4. Sex With my Ex {DESPERATE MONOLOGUES Challenge!}

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 9 months ago

    Hmm, who used whom? I mean, he could have used her to get a quick fix, and she obviously went out with him and let him flirt with her, showing no restraint. It seems she went back to him to fill the gap her current boyfriend left behind. Very true of many “couples”, the break-up, the return, the fringe benefits. I think you’ve captured the thoughts well!

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