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Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)

Although it looked ordinary at first, something definately wasn’t right. The boy turned his head to the side and straightened his hazel brown hair until it lay flat around his ears. He glanced down again, trying to hide the fact that he was staring wide-eyed at this random, beautiful girl standing before him. He opened his mouth to speak words, but nothing appeared but the smoke curling out from the cold air of the park.

She was definately not ordinary, more like extraordinary. She smiled and giggled, tucking her blonde curls deeper into her hood. Her face altered to a shade of red and she finally got courage.

“Hey.” she whispered seductively. Yep, far from ordinary. The hazel-haired boy gaped in wonder at the actual words that came from her perfect-shaped mouth. If only, he could speak too, then they could get together and create something called a conversation.

Speak his mind told him but his brain failed to connect two and two as he tried again to converse with this angel.

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Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
ACORN
Posted 4 months ago

Great story. This is a good setup for a sequel!

=D
Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
SKermitgorf
Posted 4 months ago

i remember doing that.. often.. girls are so intimidating…
Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
Blusparrow
Posted 4 months ago

aww I am sorry Kermitgorf, I didn’t think we were that intimidating. This is really cute!
LoA
Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
LovingYourHeartbreak♥
Posted 4 months ago

aww this is soo cutee =D
Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
Kinetic Kenzie™
Posted 4 months ago

this is a very cute story. i think there is a great sequel coming up, or at least its set up for one. but nevertheless, amazing ficlet, i cant wait to read more.
Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)
howhardlifeis♥
Posted 3 months ago

awww this is way too cute..and i wish guys would build up the courage to actually say something back.