Revenge

by Freedom

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Jack smirked and replied, “Thanks … Sheryl.” He read her name tag as she unhooked the short door at the counter. And then Jack was standing next to me, his presence unnerving.

“Kit why don’t you go and show this young man to the secret room.” Sheryl winked like an idiot and I faked, matching her excitement. I so should not have volunteered.

I strolled slowly to the back rooms of the shop with Jack trailing me. I made sure I didn’t turn back to look at him because then I would surely freak or run or something. Inside the first door, I turned to him and began to explain it.

“Um so these are the—“ but his hand was over my mouth in an instant. Not again! He closed the door and we were in darkness. I began to search for the switch because in the light, everything is different. Jack didn’t give me a chance.

He dragged me to the back of the room, making sure my mouth was fully incapable. Jerk.

“You didn’t back up my story the other day. You’ll have to pay for that.”

What is it with him and revenge?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Revenge

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Okay, no, this guy is a complete freak of nature. I think the steroids have gone to his head. I just hope Kit doesn’t develop Stockholm Syndrome.

  2. Revenge

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lol, totally a freak of nature! What if it is not only revenge? What if in some strange way he compinsating for something? Maybe he problems talking to girls… Hm.. Lol!
    LoA

  3. Revenge

    Smile4life!'s Buddy Icon Smile4life!

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OMG ! What a jerk! Who does he think he is and why does he keep hurting her?
    LoA

  4. Revenge

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Poor Kit.

    This reminds me of a bad thriller movie where the same girl gets attacked over and over but never dies.

    Thumbs up!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yes, Kit is the ultimate damsel in distress. But she’s tough, too.

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