Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

by Mistress Elsha Hawk

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“Father! We need to talk!” Kira pleaded, his eyes shining. He couldn’t remember being this happy.

“Not now son. The ring your dragon attacked was only partially finished. And only one battalion was there. You need a strategy.”

“Come to my tent!” bellowed Perceval in his egotistical way.

Kira followed, but only because he didn’t want to be separated from his father. Olgoth walked with a slight limp from being dropped and he winced as his burns rubbed on his clothes.

Katra followed too. She couldn’t bear to be separated from Kira, much to his embarrassment, but she proved useful in getting water, salve, and bandages for Olgoth’s wounds.

Once he was properly bandaged, Olgoth began to draw in the dirt inside the tent. He drew the five rings, the coast, and where he’d overheard the armies were moving to camp.

Kira just stared at his father. He never knew how smart, and brave he was. He thought about how he must have had a loyal following for so many men to be willing to claim his name.

Who was this man?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh look i was going to sequel and say it wasnt finished that is why it fell ‘Get out of my mind!!!!!”lol

  2. Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Mwa-ha-ha! I’m on to you, Man! Of course it wasn’t finished, the tax collector was building it, “carting dirt up to a height of 16 feet” remember? okay, so for one really weird moment we are on the same brain wavelength. Yikes! Go ahead and sequel!

  3. Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

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    Posted 24 days ago

    hahahah. poor kira and katra…

  4. Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

    Not You's Buddy Icon Not You

    Posted 21 days ago

    katra followed too is not a complete sentence.

  5. Not the Olgoth Kira Remembers

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 9 days ago

    It is a complete sentence! There’s a verb and a noun. Sounds like Kira’s dad changed a bit when he left…. And I’m starting to feel bad for Katra! She’s worse than a puppy!!!

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