Lips

by SocccerISmyLIFE

No, NO, NO!! This is not happening! I can’t fall in love with him! I won’t fall in love with him. I pulled away from him and out of his warm, strong arms. I began to walk away.
“Linz, please forgive me.” Ty started. I turned around and walked up to him. I stared into those big blue eyes.
“No. Ty I want to but I can’t. We are still young and I just don’t know anymore.” I stood up on my tip toes and I kissed his angel like lips.
“Good-bye Ty.” I spoke quietly. I walked away. He didn’t follow. He stood still almost not breathing.

He watched me walk silently all the way back into my house, while fingering his lips.

He sighed heavily and walked back to his house, like a retreat from war.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ohhh that was good.

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    owwwwwwch!!!! where can you go from here???

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “almost not breath” for a little longer and linz can be rid of u!

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    xtremepoison's Buddy Icon xtremepoison

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    soooo needs a sequel

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ooh more more more plzzz

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    okay, yeah, uhm, sequel or i will like, die.
    boom.
    u killed me.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Good. Now dump the other one.

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    unknown and not discovered....'s Buddy Icon unknown and not discovered....

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Okkk, all the people that are trying to continue your stories need to like, quit (no offense) bc they kinda ruin it for me personally. I love all the stories you wrote and i think u need to continue. REALLY .

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with unknown and not discovered… gosh thats a long name… anyways I do agree, continue please!!!

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    -LadyInRed-'s Buddy Icon -LadyInRed-

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    come on, i’m dying for the story to continue

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 9 months ago

    wow. that was really good. nice way to end the story. i like the “retreat from war” analogy.

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