i couldnt get saces between my paragraphs. m not sure why.. but i think i would have looked better with spaces. oh well

cute start

oOo, nice suspense! sigh. if only guys weren’t like tht, we wouldn’t hav this fear=]

All guys are NOt like that! I take umbrage lol.

aww…sweet
a few spelling errors, but I like the story idea.
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I can totally see this happening to me! Good start