omg, six daughters, seven sons.. wow.
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poor sarah, if i’m correct, they hang “witches”?
love the storyline here! haven’t seen anything about witches in a while

My dad has thirteen siblings.
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Anyway, (funny how that last part had nothing to do with critiquing the story) it really does seem you’re getting better with every ficlet. They look better, read better, but more importantly, are better. Keep it up. Now BURNS ‘ER!

She turned me into a newt!!!!!






I got better…

Nice work, I’d like to learn more about her. You could also try using Sarah to continue MBTM ’s story, started at http://ficlets.com/stories/10801. (Yes, I am saying this because I like the idea of two Witchfinders General fighting it out…)

if they float, they’re innocent……

Intense. My interest is captured once again…
There is just no hope for me is there. :P

I thought if they floated they were a witch and were burned? (if they drown they’re innocent).

Great work, I was just thinking this morning about the concept of common enemy, and this portrays it nicely.

yeah m8ryx you’re correct…so either way they died, which is pretty horrible if you think about it

love this
im obsessed with the idea of witchcraft and magic…cant get enough of it

did someone say PLEASE SEQUEL
i think so :)
you know what to do kermie

Awesome.

Perfect names for the characters :) Definitely piqued my interest for more.

I love it! Perfection!