Nicely done.

Correction: beautifully done; I came back through to see if anything had been added, and this one just gets better every time I read it. The third paragraph in particular, is wonderful.

yeah wow i love it

I agree with everyone, this is truly touching material. Amazing job, my man Tarzan.

I want to cry, too. It was a really nice piece of writing.

Very very nice transition from violent to sentimental. It worked really well; there was plenty of emotion in this. Great job – even if this is 4 months old.