I love it
and i love your about me, too
so true.

that’s great!

i like the end: i’m fallilng without a parachute

Fabulous and beautiful. The ending was perfect.

This is great. I understand exactly what this feels like.

wow… the ending is… wow! haha i agree with everyone else.

and I like the “Yeah, I just need someone to catch me.” It doesn’t make the speaker sound weak but it’s got a note of surrender at the same time.

Fabulous! I have felt exactly like this for a long time, wishing someone would truly see and know and help, me. Also falling without a parachute after a leap of faith..I know what that feels like, too. I like the line about the plastered smile, because it hides what we truly are feeling inside, so no one will ever look deeper, even though we wish they would.

Truly beautiful, I know and understand the feelings the speaker is going through.