excellent! i love how it’s so serious, yet amazingly funny in the end. brilliant.

Very nice story, reminds me of the goog ol’ days.

lol i love how it’s all serious and then ur friend goes and says that at the end – tht was hilarious!!

Hahaha…don’t u just luv high school? LOL
I luv how its serious and then your friend suddenly makes some random comment about how your hair smells like fruitloops… LOL

i love this. alot :)
thanks for entering and i think you’ll turn out pretty good.
nice job

Great twist at the end, and, of course, lovely descriptions as always. didn’t we set up something where you just took it for granted that every time I left a comment on one of your ficlets, it would be complimenting your descriptions and style? It’s just sort of a given.

I love it! I especially love the randomness at the end. =)