Comments on The Look On Her Face by DreamGhost

Fyora Cartagan

Very surreal, I love that all this is in his head too. Very well done!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
butterflygirl6106

Very nicley done. I think this has a very good message about the state of the world we live in today….
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
THX 0477

Awesome, especially the line “It wasn’t until I was being escorted out of the museum…” I, too, did not expect this to be sequeled, and I think it has more sequels than any of my other ficlets. I think you had really touched on a nerve with your original piece.

LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
Lone Writer

Ohh. snap.. Poor man.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
.:band baby:.

this is very nice. and much more like what would really happen. 5 *’s
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
someday_93

It is sad how hard it is to connect now…but great writing!
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.
wytherwings

wow, thats so sad
but amazing writing
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:59:59.