I like the overall tone of this, and it sounds like the start of some mysTEEERRiiiOOuuusss fantasy tale. There are just a few spelling errors, and the tense changes a little too quickly between the first two sentences. Other than that, I like it. Nice job.

ooooooh, I like the silver spikey-haired one with the glow. He seems like a hero here, and the man and creature are unknown villains, like its just their job, and they don’t really want to do it.
sequel! sequel!