Ooh, very intriguing, I like it. I would love to see a sequel, maybe even write one. But that’s up to you. More, more, I say!
It would be great if you could write a sequel. This story kind of annoys me that it is so prequel-ish. I need more practice writing really short stories :)
This is pretty good. Keep it going.
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