Beautiful imagery. Fabulous job.

This is so true of about 75% of all relationships (if not more!). In your first paragraph, the word “whose” is misspelled. “Who’s” should only be used as a contraction of “who is.” Other than that, it’s purrfect. ^,

And that was supposed to be a cat face emoticon but attack of the ficlets happened and killed my cat. C’est la vie!

Thanks, Ana Christina, I fixed the spelling…

beautiful. very, very nicly written. i l.o.v.e.d it!

Wonderful

I love how you write psychologically…what people are thinking. I like how her motivation is not to fix, but be fixed.