Very original and stylistic. It sets the mood very well.
LoA

!!! I am on your top ten Ficleteers!! I am so honored!! :]

I love love LOVE the first part:

I have…

…laughed in the face of Death

…lied right to Truth

…Broken the heart of Love

…stabbed Friendship in the back

…betrayed Trust

…disturbed Peace

That is fantastic. I don’t know why I love it so much but I do.

This so awesome and original. I absolutely love the way you personified Evil. I’m in awe.

omg, that’s is soooo cool and i don’t know why i think that. i guess it’s just the way you wrote it is all but really, it’s soooo good. another great story by

i loveoveoveovoeoveoveoveoveoveove this! idk why, though, the presence of.. strongness? here is powerful. oh whatever, i can’t describe this. i just love it=]

Very Dark!!!