Oh my. Everything that you write is so poetic and so pretty. Your words flow like the sea. I especially loved the line, “Yellow line, white line. Red light. World comes to a stop and I’m holding my breath for you.” And the last two lines, too.
Your writing could rock me to sleep like the waves.

Your way of writing never ceases to capture me. Astounding.

Whenever you have a story on the board, I have to read it because of the beautiful way you have of turning a story in to a lullaby. Agreed with my fellow Ficleteers. Astounding.
LoA

Me too, I always immediately click on them when I see you’ve written a new story, you are truly an amazing writer, and this is another example.
LoA