Not exactly the kind of race I’d imagined, but very good play on words! I think I’d be nervous too, not sure if you’re delivering a regular baby or one of those “new” ones. What do you tell the parents?
I always try to look for those kinds of plays on a word or phrase in a challenge or inspiration when I can find them. It’s fun and mind-expanding. Great job!
Great twist. The Great Rural (“old” doctors, family “clans”) have always been and will always be the home of Significant Change. (How’s that for a lack of perspicuity?) LoA
Now that is the type of ficlet I’m looking for when I post something like that: something intriguing, stylistic, and definitely not what I expected. I love to see what different people think. This could almost be the beginning of a series.
Mistress Elsha Hawk
Tad Winslow
Howie Amourscow
Eckhouse
Saint Chuck
Stovohobo
Storykeeper of Fae
.:band baby:.