the end line – perfect.

This is, all of it, perfect. Impeccable. Makes me think…hmm.
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Wow, I love it. It conjures a War of the Worlds type image, minus the aliens. =)

Brutal. Good description of the heavy storm of war. And a nice job of making it open-ended—could be WWII , could be out future.
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Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

This is… wow. This is unbeleivable. Talk about shivers.