Very very beatuiful and captivating. I can almost cry when i read the second line. I would say this is my favorite ficlet that any one has ever written. I love this story so much!
heartfelt…that makes it truly beautiful. The poeticyness (my new word) was smooth and flowed nicely (not that I would have noticed since I was so enraptured anyway) 5 STARS (or just one extra special one) P.S. my sister and 6 other girls were star sisters and they got small star tattoos in honor of one star that had already risen in death…and now my sister has joined. this piece was very touching
This is breathtakingly wonderful. I adore the way you have written it – with the interjections about the friend planning to commit suicide. It was perfectly written. Really well done.
wow. i think i may head over to a thesaurus and look up words for “beautiful”, because my vocabulary alone cannot describe this. ~ yoITSme – yeah, that is a book, and a really great one at that.
awww,i think im gonna cry seriously. oh my gosh here come the water works. hehehehe just kidding. reminds me of some one maybe thats why it made me almost cry. very very good,really. :)
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