wow. Both of these were good. I seriously was not expecting this from the title! Nice job.
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Whoa! That was a shocker! I just thought she was a cheater. So she really does love him? Well that’s good. I like it!

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Intrigue, plot twist, awesome LoA

LOL !
The plot thickens…

you come up with the most strangest names.
Violet Williams?
Winter Shields?
hahaha.

I love how Violet Williams sounds as though it were her true name and Winter Shields makes more sense as the false name, but it’s reversed…just one of the clever things that makes this story work. Keep it going!

Lovely cadence to it all, a real sense of urgency. Must admit I wasn’t sure what’s going on. Is Haley the person to whom the Jeep belongs? I suppose I should read on to find out.

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oh my gosh I really hate the title, just to let you kno. Its so dumb, it makes me chuckle, literally.

THE GUYS NAME IS HALEY ? THAT IS A PRETTY GURLY NAME .