Awwww!

Aw, that’s so cute!

Awe!! That’s adorable!! I just love it.
LoA

Cute and with a funny last line. Nice, romantic descriptions throughout.
LoA

aw, great job!

Sweet story!!

Awww, soo sweet! I love the first paragraph…describing landscape is so much fun….

awwww….beautiful description!! especially at the beginning. And I love the last line. Very sweet.