That is so deep, and so thoughtful. Nice!

Wow… way to make something seemingly insignificant worth alot.

You nailed the onslaught of questions young minds always have when they first develop their speaking skills. And through the questions the story is revealed, very creative way to tell a story.

I agree with the above! Very creative, very deeo and thoughtful. Just overall good.
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The ending blew me away. This is awesome.

This is, for lack of a better word, beautiful. The childhood curiosity, the way you show the characters without anything but dialog, and still portray them amazingly…it’s brilliant. I love it. And the ending was perfect.
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one word : amazing

You’re 13!! amazing, brillant use of dialogue. heartfelt, deep. I just lost my mother and my niece wanted to call mom-mom in heaven, her dad said that’s not possible she said “can’t you try?”