Interesting. Very cryptic, which fits the material. the computerese worked as well, I thought, though it didn’t leave you a lot of room for the story itself. That’s what sequels are for, I suppose.
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Very techno…

Are you kidding, THX ? I had, like, 400 characters left. I didn’t even know what to do with them! Oh, dang—did I say that out loud?

Nice, different from anything I’ve ever seen. This could go so many different directions! Can’t wait to see what you do with it.
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this makes me go “eeeee!”. stories told through emails and transmission static are deck.

WOW JUST WOW !!!!!

Whoa…inventive. Epitome of creative. Very nice. You’re in a spy mode lately, huh? No, I did not just attempt to define you. That is impossible to do for any human. I merely noticed a trend.
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wtheckk ???

very mysteriousus, and technoeyey.

The positive response to this bodes well for similar things I’ve written… hooray.

Very creative way to display a story. It reminds me of Michael Crichton (which is a good thing)