freakin awesome story.. such vivid imagery.. very exquisite picture painted by your artfully chosen words.

You got that out of the picture?
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Neat story, very evocative of languid afternoons in an urban setting, just lolling about, listening to the lives of the neighbors. Great feel to the whole thing.
LoA

Wow, fantastic descriptions and imagery throughout the whole piece. Loved it; I was almost jealous that I wasn’t there to hear the music.

Absolutely loved it.

thank you

This is very good. It reminds me of a song by an Afrikaans South African artist that has been covered by almost every other Afrikaans artist, called “Lisa’s piano”, and deals with the same issue – hearing music tinkling out and being entranced by it.

I agree with the other commentators, the imagery is just beautiful