I love this story a lot. Its very descriptive and flows perfectly.
10 stars

i really love this. beautiful

I agree. Nice flow, and it is beautiful! Sounds like a perfect guy, sigh. I hope you find him!
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Like the dream of the heroine in this piece, this story stays with the reader. Beautifully told, particularly the last line.
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Lovely. Your character will find him, because that’s how it goes. There’s a bit sort of like this only different in my work-in-progress novel. It’s not romantic, though…because he’s her brother. Anyway…
I liked it!
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