Great big idea told beautifully with a bitter sweet ending. Amazing sci-fi stuff. Definitely worthy of a sequel, if my brain was working that well this AM.
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Your sci-fi is like none other. Incredible description with great detail. I don’t care if you even have no idea what you’re talking about (which I’m sure you do), because it sure sounds fantastic to me. =)

Sheesh, thanks for the compliments! :) I need to do more of this stuff and actually build up some longer stories

One of the more amazing sci-fi stories on ficlets.
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I completly agree with everything above. =) Very good job.
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