So, was it Pablo’s gun? she didn’t seem to know it was loaded, and will they survive, John and Pablo? I mean Renard’s aim…..with his tics…..and will the good or the bad guys win?
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So many questions…and ha, that was great. “Guess it was loaded after all.” Sequel?

I agree with emma jo, that is one heck of a last line. Awesome!
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i decided to rewrite this series as a script for a play for my final in creative writing, it was just too tempting.

Hey, good on ya’ for making something productive out of this. Do Culture Shock and I get collaborator credit, or did you edit out our bits?
Sequel done, and hoo boy, it got a little dark. My apologies in advance for that one.

Ok so… Pablo is an ex-italian officer and possibly him and John are connected with the Brazilian Mafia… and John works for Pierre… Now why would Pierre draw the attention of a spy/mafiosa???